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The pain I feel
my hearts desires
my soul shattered
once and for all
my thawed heart
turns to ice once again
these things;
hopes and dreams
a fairytale fantasy
ones true love
do not exist
the darkness i feel
that i knew was there
feeding and waiting
has finally awakened
with the anger and hate
the pain and suffering
I want it all to disappear
I want to feel nothing
but at what price?
i guess that's obvious
The only thing I have left
My humanity
©2008-2009 ~inuyashalovergirl1
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:iconcsnyder:
so sad and well expressed and good question, at what price
:iconinuyashalovergirl1:
thank you!
I was a litte sad and angry
I kinda morphed it into something greater in a poem.
sorta about a bad expierience you had with a boy/girl.

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If I were to die would I be forgotten?
If I were to die would I even want to be remembered?
The day I beg is the day hell freezes over and I become Satan!
My deviant webpage yes click it!
[link]
:iconcsnyder:
i understand but its still wonderful:hug:
welcome
:iconinuyashalovergirl1:
thank you!
yah it came out im about to post a new one too!
this ones kindsa cool!

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If I were to die would I be forgotten?
If I were to die would I even want to be remembered?
The day I beg is the day hell freezes over and I become Satan!
My deviant webpage yes click it!
[link]
:iconsedahliah:
I like this. The poem takes a nice turn in thought at the end that's really intriguing, good job. =)

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Of all of the things I need to say, all of these words are in my way.

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:iconinuyashalovergirl1:
ahh i was....emotional or angry im not sure at the end
it flowed faster i suppose.

--
If I were to die would I be forgotten?
If I were to die would I even want to be remembered?
The day I beg is the day hell freezes over and I become Satan!
My deviant webpage yes click it!
[link]
:iconcsnyder:
youre welcome!
cool
looking forward to it kitty
:iconinuyashalovergirl1:
you gotta see it too puppy!
you saw it and you loved it!
i rule and so do you!

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If I were to die would I be forgotten?
If I were to die would I even want to be remembered?
The day I beg is the day hell freezes over and I become Satan!
My deviant webpage yes click it!
[link]

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